Wertville's drawing corner
#1
Posted 27 February 2011 - 01:44 PM
Very few people (99.999% percent of the world, give or take 0.001%) know that I'm currently trying to master the 'Art' of drawing. However, until today, I've only been able to successfully draw based on other pictures
But now that changes!
Today I drew an original picture I'm satisfied with, and I thought today would be the day to spread my self-improvement throughout the world! Also... I want criticism! So please, comment on all pictures you see!
First up, some of my pictures based on other pictures: (Most links are on an external site due to the fact that I already uploaded them there, or I found them there.)
Gilgamesh from Fate/Stay Night:
My copy:
Original:
Not the best, honestly. I kinda messed up on a few parts... Most notably everything except the jacket. That being said, this picture is rather old, and I've improved quite a bit since then.
Hisui from Tsukihime:
My version:
Original:
Much better than the Gilgamesh one, that's for sure. The reason mine is so dark is because the lines didn't show up properly... Perhaps I should have taken off my glasses first? (That's a Tsukihime joke, I don't usually wear glasses )
The only problems I have with mine are the shoes and arm, and they didn't turn out so badly. But it's difficult to be your own critic, so please point out any errors I may have made :s
Now we have my original drawing (And hopefully soon to be drawings):
Not much for me to comment on because I just drew it, but please criticize. (Also, I didn't add in any hair lines/tones/whatever yet, so don't complain about that )
So comments and criticism please! I'm a bit of a masochist when it comes to my art, so please criticize! Did I mention criticism?
EDIT:
Table of contents to laster posts where I've put my drawings:
http://wii2boards.co...8-10.html#p1511
- A very basic drawing that I like the result of
#2
Posted 27 February 2011 - 03:31 PM
#4
Posted 27 February 2011 - 06:32 PM
#5
Posted 27 February 2011 - 06:41 PM
#6
Posted 27 February 2011 - 07:51 PM
Oh, as for the image size, that's a good reason to use the attachment system.
#7
Posted 27 February 2011 - 07:58 PM
It's just that the computer I was using was really slow... Despite being better than my laptop in every hardware-possible way. (I don't get it either...) It would have taken me forever to upload them all.
As for Gilgi, I think I just plain messed up on the shape of his head. It was too flat overall, and I probably should have attempted some shading. And that neck part. Definitely that neck part :s
#8
Posted 27 February 2011 - 11:49 PM
^Click it
^I agree with this guy
You know you want to! 'Tis leaked Nintendo information!
#10
Posted 28 February 2011 - 05:44 PM
don't really know what to say… the line on the neck of Gilgamesh is a bit weird… i actually don't feel comfortable criticising a drawing because i suck at drawing, but i too am trying to learn to draw, hopefully one day i too shall be able to show the world my crappy drawings.
#12
Posted 02 March 2011 - 04:52 PM
Like a Boss
#14
Posted 02 March 2011 - 04:58 PM
Like a Boss
#15
Posted 05 March 2011 - 10:23 AM
You have more patience than I'll ever have. Can't find anything to criticize, mostly because I'm not so familiar with art styles.
These are my dragon persona Darren's parents. Or Darrents, if you will.
#16
Posted 18 March 2011 - 12:06 PM
I drew a new picture! Rather quickly! And I like the result
I know it's very generic and basic, but the quality is what counts!
I just drew it, so I can't comment too much on it myself, but I think I could do a MUCH better job on the ear (Which I usually try to hide) and maybe a bit better on the eye's and their shinyness.
Any other comments? (And (Feldian) criticisms?)
EDIT:
Forgot to mention, don't complain about the hair not being shaded... Nothing is shaded yet, so... Yeah.
#17
Posted 20 March 2011 - 10:46 AM
I like it. Since you didn't shade in the hair, I'm going to assume his hair is blonde. I actually like it without shading though. Good work.
#18
Posted 20 March 2011 - 11:26 AM
I guess I'll just make one or two more heads I'm satisfied with, then I can move onto the real hard part... The body :/
And I guess blond will save me some effort, so sure. Why not. Though I still think I should do a bit of shading
#19
Posted 22 March 2011 - 08:13 AM
If you really want to see the only piece of art I've been truly satisfied with. Tough. I'll PM you if your desperate.
Anyways, I like that head. I agree about body's damn evil those things!
^Click it
^I agree with this guy
You know you want to! 'Tis leaked Nintendo information!
#20
Posted 22 March 2011 - 11:10 AM
Anime style REQUIRES shading, especially when you aren't using color, like me.
As for the body... Well, I've got an Anatomy book, so I should be good. It's even made for art, rather than science, so I don't have to worry about overloads of text XD
Oh, and you should post your drawing. That way you can be more confident (Trust me on that one) and people can give you advice on how to improve
(Even if you don't wanna post it, PM me with it. I'd like to see )
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