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[Elric]

Estella who breaks the heart of many men
And ask when it will end
Who is perfect
A white swan
Who is elegant 
Who is perfect
Can't love
Estella,
who is bent and broken
A deep hole where her heart is
Who is loved,
But can't love back

(we all have estellas in our lives. This is what kinda inspired me. I'm also dedicated to becoming a good poet )

[HaHa-No]

I can't really comment on poetry, I'm not much of a fan. The only poetry I have ever enjoyed is that done by Edgar Allen Poe and Lewis Carol. For the Alice In Wondeland series.
Based on what I know of the subject though, very very good.

[Ruthie]

I like the contrasts between elegant/perfect and bent/broken. Good stuff