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#1 Elric

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 05:32 PM

Dream, by superdarkyoshi

The sun shined,
I even saw my shadow
The grass was green,
And the sky a bright blue
I smile,
Warm and happy

My life is great
My life is pure
My life is

a distant dream

I close my eyes,
The image still believable

a fantasy

I lay there
Eyes closed
To get back

Impossible

It's only then that I realised,
It was a dream

Never to come true,
Never to be destiny

Edited by superdarkyoshi, 14 June 2011 - 06:44 PM.

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#2 Camcam281

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Posted 14 June 2011 - 06:30 PM

You still never succeed in NOT amazing me! You have raw talent. Now, just mix these skills with your guitar knowledge, and learn how to sing and you could write and perform songs! I could see you on stage one day! Good luck and I hope your writing skills won't become just a dream! Keep on rocking them out!
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#3 Ruthie

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Posted 15 June 2011 - 01:20 PM

Very nice SDY, as always I look forward to your poems.

Never to come true,
Never to be destiny


Love it XD
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