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[Lupaie]

I'd like to receive some feedback on this animation I'm creating for work. There are some principles which are visualised as Bottles with different blocky substances. Don't try to understand why etc. But I saw some little things myself (The spinning object in the middle is not perfectly aligned in the centre, resulting in a strange motion). I need to adjust that and some minor other things. There are not any soundeffects and music yet, need to do those later.

 

Sometimes I lose myself though and fail to see any errors until I watch it back some weeks after finishing, and I think..."why didn't I see that". Well, this project is on a budget and very short deadline...

 

Well, any feedback would be welcome.

 

[TriplePower]

I like it, it seems very professional to me! What software are you using, by the way?

[Lupaie]

I like it, it seems very professional to me! What software are you using, by the way?

Cinema4d, photoshop and aftereffects

[Kiki Neko-Chan]

It agree with TriplePower, it does look professional! Yeah, the only thing you might want to fix is the spinning circle, but other than that, things are looking good!

[Lupaie]

Made some changes to the direction of the spinning wheel, the direction of the spinning bottle and removed the last cursor animation for simpler layover. Happy now with the result and creation the different versions. After that I'll be editing some filmshots I made earlier. I'll edit that with Final Cut Pro X. Lastly I need to do a lot of audio...it's my least favorite part though

Newer version

[namkotje]

Wow zotjes!

Looks awesome and really professional!

[Lupaie]

Here's a new one I'm working on. Beware, there are some effects misrendered and timing is a bit off. I'm now working on the last 20 secs of animation. So this one will stop suddenly. I really like animating stuff, hope to do more and complexer in a while.

[3Dude]

Looks great to me. Its important to remember, a lot of the time, those little imperfections that drive you batty, will never be noticed by anyone else but you.

I usually use maya or 3dsmax, but I had a go with Maxon's 4d studio, and its quite intuitive, particularly compared to autocad's madness.

[Lupaie]

I usually use maya or 3dsmax, but I had a go with Maxon's 4d studio, and its quite intuitive, particularly compared to autocad's madness.

Thanks. Yes, I used 3dsmax for some years but by stepping over to Apple I had no choice but to look into other software. I really like how C4D does things a lot easier than 3dmax. It's a really nice piece of software.

[namkotje]

Looks great to me. Its important to remember, a lot of the time, those little imperfections that drive you batty, will never be noticed by anyone else but you.
 

 

Haha, true!

[Lupaie]

Haha, true!

Ha yes, it is.

 

Here's the final montage, Wished I had some time left for the little details. Can you spot the little changes I made. If not, above point is even more valid

 

 

(If approved by client I must change it to the real audio track)

Edited by Lupaie, 02 December 2013 - 03:39 AM.

[grahamf]

All I got out of that is "One does not simply walk to VoorDoor"

[Lupaie]

Hahaha, so you don't speak dutch? Shame on you! We all talk English;)

[Mewbot]

I don't speak dutch, and all I got out of it was something about a school and it's students and teachers.

[Lupaie]

I don't speak dutch, and all I got out of it was something about a school and it's students and teachers.

Yeah, you're right. It is an animation about the vision of a university and where they want to focus on


New animation. Need to visualize an excisting area. But all buildings are very different and don't match. Also, a web of different roads kills the mood. So I decided to stylize the area. When playing Mario 3D World I took a good look at the over world map and decided that I wanted to partially go that way but a little more realistic and more serious too. I'll try to animate the tiles as in Bastion. Well, here's a first test render in progress. Still checking out the software.

Oh, I just like how I always find inspiration in videogames. The bottle animation ^^^ was influenced by the bottle-mix of different fruits in Pikmin3.

I started using Behance for my portfolio. I just started with a new project. Still figuring out for which style I'll go. The project is here https://www.behance..../897971/1626311

 

You may comment here, or there. Cheers

Edited by Lupaie, 18 February 2014 - 10:11 AM.

[Mewbot]

I love the new art style, looks really cool.

[Lupaie]

Thanks. Will add more object, life and color in the next stage