A few Haiku I thought of and wanted to share; tell me what you think if you don't mind.
Dust settles over all
Gigantic creatures tower us
Looking on forever.
Butterfly passes by
Light of tomorrow starts soon
Pray that we see life.
Star Fox loses blaster
must save Dinosaur planet
finds staff with message.
Crystal falls to the floor
Shattering on a impact
Losing all its value.
That's all I can think of for now. ^.^ Hope you liked them.
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Started by CaptainBravo1, Feb 15 2012 09:40 AM
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Posted 15 February 2012 - 09:40 AM
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Posted 15 February 2012 - 11:52 AM
I know this question is kinda stupid.. but whats a haiku? A poem?
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Posted 15 February 2012 - 02:02 PM
A haiku is a Japanese from of poetry that has to have a specific number of syllables in each line, and considering that these follow that rule, they are good.
I know this question is kinda stupid.. but whats a haiku? A poem?
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Posted 15 February 2012 - 04:40 PM
A haiku is a Japanese from of poetry that has to have a specific number of syllables in each line, and considering that these follow that rule, they are good.
I know this question is kinda stupid.. but whats a haiku? A poem?
Yeah that's correct. A haiku follows a pattern of 5 for the first line. 7 for the second line and 5 for the last line. ^.^ hope yal enjoyed them
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