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[Goom]

I'm not joking will you guys help me with some poems i have to wright about old people for my American Literature class. This is what iv'e come up with and they have to be about my neighbor next door


Roses are red
Violets are blue
You smell like apple juice
I mow your grass
pull your weeds
take out your trash
and it makes me sneeze


Mr. Bohmer at age eighty-three
You were born in Tennessee
you are the only boy in the family
surrounded by girls you are just like me

[Mignaga]

Oh about your neighbors? Ok, I know them really well.

[Mitch]

Mr. Bohmer at age eighty-three
You were born in Tennessee
You require a catherter
so that you can pee

[Tricky Sonic]

I'm not joking will you guys help me with some poems i have to wright about old people for my American Literature class. This is what iv'e come up with and they have to be about my neighbor next door


Roses are red
Violets are blue
You smell like apple juice
I mow your grass
pull your weeds
take out your trash
and it makes me sneeze


Mr. Bohmer at age eighty-three
You were born in Tennessee
you are the only boy in the family
surrounded by girls you are just like me

Well for starters...not all poems have to rhyme, but if your going to use roses are red etc...etc...you may want to make that rhyme as intended.

[Jelloman]

i see them i see them every day,
there honest faces and eyes oh what the eyes have seen
more than me in everyway through good and bad like every man,
and have served a country a country witch we live in he defended you see
he may be a man like everyone else but i am honoured to live next to thee.
Mr Bohmer,Mr Bohmer hes a man who stands tall like an old strong tree your
branches of wisdom guide us all and your leaves ever green,
ive known you most of my life the man who lives next to me
this is my poem about you from me.

Edited by Hey Look Listen!, 25 October 2012 - 12:26 PM.

[Goom]

Damn hey you listen thanks i'm using yours i owe u one

[Jelloman]

Damn hey you listen thanks i'm using yours i owe u one

hey its cool this is one of the best communality's on the internet most people on here are great and its about helping everyone

[YoshiGamer9]

You spelt "wright" wrong, you spell it like this: write, pay attention more often in language class!

[Ixchel]

It's REQUIRED to be about your neighbour? Harsh. Mine would probably be like

I've seen you but a few times.
Although I now know your name
you'll forever be Dead-Eye

It's partly from nearby crimes.
But we always know your aim
when it's the time reindeer fly,

and you can hear the bell chimes
You want to shovel for gain
of cash. Maybe to get high.


...Um. Yeah. TL;DR, I don't know poop about my neighbours, bad neighbourhood.

Edited by Ixchel, 25 October 2012 - 03:44 PM.

[jono]

There once was a man with one ear.
He drank a lot of beer.
He got in a fight,
That very same night,
And lost the other ear.