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#1 Elric

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Posted 24 January 2011 - 03:29 PM

The girl was always seemingly happy.
The girl had friends that made her laugh.
A boyfriend.
Her family wasn't poor.
But I would have never guessed,
What was really going on.
Deep inside she kept her sadness,
Locked inside of her.
No one one would ever know,
Until it was too late.

It was a late Sunday night that the girl took her own life.
The teacher told us of her the next day.
Silence was the only thing I heard when we were informed.
Silence was the only thing I spoke.
The seat in which she sat,
Empty.

Here a few days ago, now gone.

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#2 Wertville

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Posted 24 January 2011 - 03:42 PM

:D
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(My progress of emotions while reading)
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#3 Waller

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Posted 24 January 2011 - 04:07 PM

i like it, its sad but i like it. :cry:
but i dont actually know about poetry so cant really give a critic.

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#4 Play4Fun

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Posted 24 January 2011 - 04:59 PM

Nice.
It seems like you took inspiration from another poem I remember reading. 'Richard Cory'. I don't know if you've ever read it.
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#5 Epic Kirby

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Posted 29 January 2011 - 09:38 AM

Wow... that was pretty deep. The empty seat symbol is really a powerful image.
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#6 Bobby

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Posted 02 February 2011 - 09:07 AM

Oh my days that was so beautifully sorrowful...
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#7 Bartman2

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Posted 06 February 2011 - 01:06 PM

is this based on a true story?
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