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#1 unleashedknight

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 06:45 AM

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#2 BanjoKazooie

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 06:56 AM

You need to add tilt then make a side to make it more 3 demensional. But the cover art looks nice, it just looks like a poster not a box.

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#3 Stephen

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 07:03 AM

I like the design allot, it shows you the new features of the game which is good, and it isn't too crowded. Also the colour scheme is good too.
The one thing I will say is that the New super Mario U logo needs to be in front of the baby Yoshi, so that you can see all the writing.
Also if you want to create the whole box I found a good template to use
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Edited by stephen, 30 August 2012 - 07:04 AM.

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#4 Alph

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 07:14 AM

I like it, try to put Luigi and the Pink Yoshi a bit lower down because you can't see a bit of the writing and make the insides of the bubbles (the black bit) transparent. Other than that it's really good!

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#5 Mignaga

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Posted 30 August 2012 - 11:58 AM

Place the images on the cover in better places. It looks like you just kinda threw them on there. Aside from that it looks good.

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