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#1 AndyG

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Posted 01 March 2013 - 06:43 PM

I have been trying to upload my T-shirt design to the Threadless forums to see what needs to be changed before it's released, however for some reason it won't allow me to post a new thread so i will try here instead. This design i made was literally about 10 minutes work and has an Adventure time vibe to it.

 

 

These are the main problems i feel might need to be changed/added.

 

*Colour of background (is the orange okay)

*Any texts or quotes to say underneath

 

Design 1:

http://s9.postimage...._1_35_10_PM.png

 

Design 2 (changed the pupils):

http://s24.postimage..._1_34_59_PM.png

 

Sorry, the website i was using wouldn't let me upload thumbnails.

 

 

 

IMO the second one is the best look but i will leave that up to you to decide.


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#2 Kiki Neko-Chan

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Posted 01 March 2013 - 06:48 PM

I have been trying to upload my T-shirt design to the Threadless forums to see what needs to be changed before it's released, however for some reason it won't allow me to post a new thread so i will try here instead. This design i made was literally about 10 minutes work and has an Adventure time vibe to it.

 

 

These are the main problems i feel might need to be changed/added.

 

*Colour of background (is the orange okay)

*Any texts or quotes to say underneath

 

Design 1:

http://s9.postimage...._1_35_10_PM.png

 

Design 2 (changed the pupils):

http://s24.postimage..._1_34_59_PM.png

 

Sorry, the website i was using wouldn't let me upload thumbnails.

 

 

 

IMO the second one is the best look but i will leave that up to you to decide.

It looks really sweet! I'd buy this ;)

 

Try photoshopping it on a t-shirt so we can see what it looks like on an actual t-shirt.


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#3 AndyG

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Posted 01 March 2013 - 07:36 PM

Just as i'd feared, i put the design together and it looks really.....plain.

It definitely need to put on some sort of text because in it'current state it's far too dull

 

http://s8.postimage....rged_pupils.jpg

 

Again, sorry for not posting the thumbnail.

 

In case your wondering, im using Illustrator CS4 :)


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#4 PixelKnot

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Posted 01 March 2013 - 08:37 PM

Yup, it reminds me a lot of Adventure Time. Looks good.

 

And looking at the photoshop of the face on a T-Shirt, I do agree it looks somewhat empty.



#5 AndyG

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Posted 02 March 2013 - 03:16 AM

It needs a funny quote of some sort, any ideas?


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#6 SoldMyWiiUAndLeftTheForums

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Posted 02 March 2013 - 07:55 AM


I want one *throws money at screen*



#7 Big Boss

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Posted 03 March 2013 - 07:40 PM

Haha, I like it. I'd buy it fo' sho'.

 

Quote should be:

"Soul Plz? :>"



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Posted 06 March 2013 - 09:56 PM

Still no luck getting the Threadless forums to work, anymore suggestions?


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#9 Jacob

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Posted 07 March 2013 - 01:12 PM

Sweet babies x 


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#10 CookieEpic

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Posted 07 March 2013 - 04:53 PM

It needs a funny quote of some sort, any ideas?

 

 

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Hmm..

 

"I WATCH YOU WHEN YOU SLEEP"

 

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Posted 07 March 2013 - 05:25 PM

Haha, I like it. I'd buy it fo' sho'.

 

Quote should be:

"Soul Plz? :>"

What do you want?


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#12 Big Boss

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Posted 08 March 2013 - 05:55 AM

What do you want?

I don't even know who you are.



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Posted 12 March 2013 - 11:16 AM

The first one is really funny!


 

 


#14 AndyG

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Posted 14 March 2013 - 02:13 AM

The first one is really funny!

Yeah but the pupils don't stand out to well. I might just leave it how it is and move the eyes down to the stomach area so it will be more appropriate for women's tee's


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#15 DéliopT

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Posted 14 March 2013 - 04:20 AM

Yeah but the pupils don't stand out to well. I might just leave it how it is and move the eyes down to the stomach area so it will be more appropriate for women's tee's

Try posting that image later to see how it works.

I still think there`s nothing wrong with the first pic. Maybe try rasising the pupils a little to give that sense of satisfaction.


 

 





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