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#1 Elric

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Posted 16 November 2014 - 02:39 PM

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Hi everyone. For those who don't know, I like to pretend to be a good poet sometimes. I sometimes even write poetry and perform them at poetry slams. This thread will be for posting my poetry/videos of my slam poetry. I might post more if you guys enjoy it. 

Hope you all enjoy, and like always, comments/feedback is welcome. 

 

This was my first poem, "Egyptian Cotton" (ignore the title on the video, the person who uploads all the videos to the channel is kind of lack and often makes spelling errors). 

 

 

 

This one is literally about stage fright: 

 


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#2 Bill Cipher

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Posted 16 November 2014 - 04:02 PM

Elric, YOU MONSTER.

 

After all this time, you finally show your face...And YOU'RE NOT A GOLDEN ALBINO WIZARD?

 

Shame on you, Shame...

 

In all honesty, I enjoyed them.


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Posted 16 November 2014 - 05:19 PM

I liked them. Good job. I get the same sort of stuff when I get up in front of people, though I don't write poetry.


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Posted 16 November 2014 - 06:24 PM

Great job, I thought it was great and entertaining too. Very talented and creative.

 

Just one piece of advice.... don't be on your phone during a performance.... facebook can wait till after!   :P


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#5 Horchata

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Posted 17 November 2014 - 12:07 AM

Very nice, Elric. Really enjoyed these :>


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#6 Elric

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Posted 02 April 2015 - 11:12 AM

Oh hey, new poems. Hope you enjoy 

 

 

 


Update: New Poem! People have said this one has been the best one so far, but I am still working on it to be honest. What do you think? 

 


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#7 Horchata

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Posted 03 April 2015 - 02:13 AM


 

Update: New Poem! People have said this one has been the best one so far, but I am still working on it to be honest. What do you think? 

From what I've seen from you, I can agree this one has been the most charming.
I did feel like it was a bit short, can't wait for you to finish it.
 
I'll be looking forward for more of your slam-poetry.


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