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[Elric]

So, practice makes perfect. I'm going to post my art as I make it, in a attempt to improve each time.
So I'll start with my first two drawings. I'm going to try to draw Something frequently, so as much critique as you can would be helpful.

First drawing:

http://i1192.photobu...5-41-19_298.jpg
You've probably seen it already.

August 17
http://i1192.photobu...0-47-40_382.jpg

Just trying to get my style down along with basic shapes. I know its not the best, especially the eyes >.< . I tried to make him look like he was thinking about something. Well, what do you think? I left the sketch lines to show that I'm actually trying to go by basic shapes and the such..

http://i1192.photobu...4-41-26_378.jpg

So, I think I got the porpotions right and the alignment right but I'm not quite sure about the ears on how they look. What do you think?

Edited by superdarkyoshi, 17 August 2011 - 07:54 PM.

[Brian6330]

So, practice makes perfect. I'm going to post my art as I make it, in a attempt to improve each time.
So I'll start with my first two drawings. I'm going to try to draw Something frequently, so as much critique as you can would be helpful.

First drawing:

http://i1192.photobu...5-41-19_298.jpg
You've probably seen it already.

August 17
http://i1192.photobu...0-47-40_382.jpg

Just trying to get my style down along with basic shapes. I know its not the best, especially the eyes >.< . I tried to make him look like he was thinking about something. Well, what do you think? I left the sketch lines to show that I'm actually trying to go by basic shapes and the such..

It's a start. The second one looks more "mature"

Don't forget: Practice makes perfect!

Edited by Brian6330, 17 August 2011 - 09:52 AM.

[Wertville]

Judging by the lack of comments on my latest epic Tomoyo picture, people tend not to check back frequently :S
My suggestion is to either edit the title with '[Update: <Date>]' or announce it in a status update.

I don't know much (Anything) about drawing Animals, humanoid or not, but I'll try and point some things out
Your first one has its nose bent in a very odd way compared to his face... You have to make sure its perpendicular to the direction the face is pointing.
The second one is a bit blurry, but looks pretty good from I can see.

[Elric]

So I added a new picture. Critique would be nice.

[Brian6330]

The third picture is nice, but the ears really are little off.

Also, is the right eyebrow supposed to be that high?

Also, gratz on having the courage to post your artwork out here on the interwebz, where everyone can criticize it...

[StreetPassWanter]

I like the first one the best. The other one's were a little off, but other than that, it looks perfect!

[GeneralCraezy]

they look pretty good so far better than what I can do XD

[Fire Mario]

I like the first drawing the most. I think your excellent at drawing. I'm rubbish at drawing.