So, thought it was time for a new poem. For a more emotional effect, listen to this:
Yea, this is what inspired me, so feel free to listen to it for a better effect.
Comments/Critiques welcome, as always
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I hear a distant voice
A whisper
Speaking to me
Find me
Find me
I look at the sunset
And see something-
The closing of a door
And a opening of a new one
As the sun fades and closes
A new day begins
A new adventure and experience
The voice speaks to me
And my heart starts pumping
Anxious for a new tomorrow
The voice gets louder
Telling me to search for it
Search for beauty
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Elric
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Posted 05 October 2011 - 05:57 PM
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Posted 05 October 2011 - 06:29 PM
Very nice SDY. I especially enjoyed the last line
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Posted 05 October 2011 - 06:56 PM
Nice poem. To me it feels like it's signaling a new day - scratch that, a new beginning!
Very nice!
Very nice!
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