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[Sage]

Just some random art I've done/plan on doing and posting. Only one so far (I really don't feel like digging around for more atm) Anyway check the spoilers

Spoiler

Some original manga chick I drew never named her never cared to, Made back when I was Riztetch on Deviantart (hence the watermark) made a few years ago.

Edited by Exile, 17 January 2012 - 06:42 PM.

[aaron]

That's pretty good.

[Joshua]

It's still pretty good. I like it.

[Sage]

It's still pretty good. I like it.

Thanks when I say they aren't good it's by my standards really >_< It lacks detail that's my major complaint about it XD

[Joshua]

Thanks when I say they aren't good it's by my standards really >_< It lacks detail that's my major complaint about it XD

There is always room for improvement. If that makes you feel better about your work.

[Waller]

Y U NO DRAW EYEBROWS?!

I'm being serious, eyebrows are very important in the anime style.
Also, nose looks kind of weird, one does not simply draw a straight line.
One side of the face is bigger than the other.
You also made the chin too sharp.
Eyes are too far apart, particularly the left one.
You also kind of messed up the right eye, cover the left eye and you'll notice that they don't exactly convey the same emotion. (from our perspective, not the characters)
The hair looks kind of lazy, try doing more strands of hair.

Aaaaand that's all I can find. Ignoring all of that, you did a very good job and I can't wait to see what is up to your standards

[Gruff]

Random Art That Is Really That Great By Exile.

This is what your title should be ↑

[GeneralCraezy]

Its pretty awesome tbh

[Sage]

Y U NO DRAW EYEBROWS?!

I'm being serious, eyebrows are very important in the anime style.
Also, nose looks kind of weird, one does not simply draw a straight line.
One side of the face is bigger than the other.
You also made the chin too sharp.
Eyes are too far apart, particularly the left one.
You also kind of messed up the right eye, cover the left eye and you'll notice that they don't exactly convey the same emotion. (from our perspective, not the characters)
The hair looks kind of lazy, try doing more strands of hair.

Aaaaand that's all I can find. Ignoring all of that, you did a very good job and I can't wait to see what is up to your standards

Thank you for the constructive criticism! (that's so hard to get these days!) I do draw eyebrows now days, that's a old picture XD I used to and still somewhat struggle with symmetry >_> Yes lack of detail I know XD getting one eye to match the other is something I have had problems with lol anyway thanks for pointing out the problems it really helps!

[aaron]

The nose looks like it points up, that's one complaint I have...

[nintendofreak247]

Here's two random sketches I made with my Bamboo tablet. They're in the same style as your post, so I figured this would be the best place to post them. Any opinions or constructive criticism?

Edited by nintendofreak247, 18 January 2012 - 06:10 PM.

[aaron]

The face isn't symetrical, and if that is the same person, their eyes should be the same colour.

[Soul]

The face isn't symetrical, and if that is the same person, their eyes should be the same colour.

Nope, I think she's showing emotion with the red eyes. She's Super Saiyan!!!

[Sage]

Either that or blood rushed to her eye she is obviously damaged in the picture XD