Edited by Exile, 17 January 2012 - 06:42 PM.
Random Art That Really Isn't That Great By Exile
#1
Posted 17 January 2012 - 06:42 PM
#2
Posted 17 January 2012 - 07:01 PM
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#4
Posted 17 January 2012 - 07:18 PM
Thanks when I say they aren't good it's by my standards really >_< It lacks detail that's my major complaint about it XDIt's still pretty good. I like it.
#6
Posted 18 January 2012 - 05:01 AM
I'm being serious, eyebrows are very important in the anime style.
Also, nose looks kind of weird, one does not simply draw a straight line.
One side of the face is bigger than the other.
You also made the chin too sharp.
Eyes are too far apart, particularly the left one.
You also kind of messed up the right eye, cover the left eye and you'll notice that they don't exactly convey the same emotion. (from our perspective, not the characters)
The hair looks kind of lazy, try doing more strands of hair.
Aaaaand that's all I can find. Ignoring all of that, you did a very good job and I can't wait to see what is up to your standards
#7
Posted 18 January 2012 - 07:44 AM
This is what your title should be ↑
Bleh eh eh.
#8
Posted 18 January 2012 - 10:25 AM
#9
Posted 18 January 2012 - 11:49 AM
Thank you for the constructive criticism! (that's so hard to get these days!) I do draw eyebrows now days, that's a old picture XD I used to and still somewhat struggle with symmetry >_> Yes lack of detail I know XD getting one eye to match the other is something I have had problems with lol anyway thanks for pointing out the problems it really helps!Y U NO DRAW EYEBROWS?!
I'm being serious, eyebrows are very important in the anime style.
Also, nose looks kind of weird, one does not simply draw a straight line.
One side of the face is bigger than the other.
You also made the chin too sharp.
Eyes are too far apart, particularly the left one.
You also kind of messed up the right eye, cover the left eye and you'll notice that they don't exactly convey the same emotion. (from our perspective, not the characters)
The hair looks kind of lazy, try doing more strands of hair.
Aaaaand that's all I can find. Ignoring all of that, you did a very good job and I can't wait to see what is up to your standards
#10
Posted 18 January 2012 - 02:13 PM
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#11
Posted 18 January 2012 - 06:09 PM
Edited by nintendofreak247, 18 January 2012 - 06:10 PM.
#12
Posted 19 January 2012 - 05:03 PM
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#13
Posted 07 February 2012 - 07:48 PM
Nope, I think she's showing emotion with the red eyes. She's Super Saiyan!!!The face isn't symetrical, and if that is the same person, their eyes should be the same colour.
#14
Posted 12 February 2012 - 12:42 AM
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