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#1 Lupaie

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Posted 15 October 2013 - 07:30 AM

I'd like to receive some feedback on this animation I'm creating for work. There are some principles which are visualised as Bottles with different blocky substances. Don't try to understand why etc. But I saw some little things myself (The spinning object in the middle is not perfectly aligned in the centre, resulting in a strange motion). I need to adjust that and some minor other things. There are not any soundeffects and music yet, need to do those later.

 

Sometimes I lose myself though and fail to see any errors until I watch it back some weeks after finishing, and I think..."why didn't I see that". Well, this project is on a budget and very short deadline...

 

Well, any feedback would be welcome.

 


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Posted 15 October 2013 - 07:41 AM

I like it, it seems very professional to me! What software are you using, by the way?


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Posted 15 October 2013 - 07:58 AM

I like it, it seems very professional to me! What software are you using, by the way?


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Posted 18 October 2013 - 04:05 AM

It agree with TriplePower, it does look professional! Yeah, the only thing you might want to fix is the spinning circle, but other than that, things are looking good!


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Posted 18 October 2013 - 08:19 AM

Made some changes to the direction of the spinning wheel, the direction of the spinning bottle and removed the last cursor animation for simpler layover. Happy now with the result and creation the different versions. After that I'll be editing some filmshots I made earlier. I'll edit that with Final Cut Pro X. Lastly I need to do a lot of audio...it's my least favorite part though :(

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Posted 20 October 2013 - 08:25 AM

Wow zotjes!

Looks awesome and really professional! :o


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Posted 30 November 2013 - 01:46 AM

Here's a new one I'm working on. Beware, there are some effects misrendered and timing is a bit off. I'm now working on the last 20 secs of animation. So this one will stop suddenly. I really like animating stuff, hope to do more and complexer in a while.


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Posted 30 November 2013 - 08:38 PM

Looks great to me. Its important to remember, a lot of the time, those little imperfections that drive you batty, will never be noticed by anyone else but you.

I usually use maya or 3dsmax, but I had a go with Maxon's 4d studio, and its quite intuitive, particularly compared to autocad's madness.

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Posted 30 November 2013 - 11:04 PM

I usually use maya or 3dsmax, but I had a go with Maxon's 4d studio, and its quite intuitive, particularly compared to autocad's madness.


Thanks. Yes, I used 3dsmax for some years but by stepping over to Apple I had no choice but to look into other software. I really like how C4D does things a lot easier than 3dmax. It's a really nice piece of software.

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Posted 02 December 2013 - 03:22 AM

Looks great to me. Its important to remember, a lot of the time, those little imperfections that drive you batty, will never be noticed by anyone else but you.
 

 

Haha, true! :P


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Posted 02 December 2013 - 03:37 AM

Haha, true! :P

Ha yes, it is.

 

Here's the final montage, Wished I had some time left for the little details. Can you spot the little changes I made. If not, above point is even more valid ;)

 

 

(If approved by client I must change it to the real audio track)


Edited by Lupaie, 02 December 2013 - 03:39 AM.

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Posted 02 December 2013 - 11:34 AM

All I got out of that is "One does not simply walk to VoorDoor"


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Posted 02 December 2013 - 11:43 AM

Hahaha, so you don't speak dutch? Shame on you! We all talk English;)

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Posted 03 December 2013 - 02:35 AM

I don't speak dutch, and all I got out of it was something about a school and it's students and teachers.


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Posted 20 December 2014 - 04:18 AM

I don't speak dutch, and all I got out of it was something about a school and it's students and teachers.


Yeah, you're right. It is an animation about the vision of a university and where they want to focus on


New animation. Need to visualize an excisting area. But all buildings are very different and don't match. Also, a web of different roads kills the mood. So I decided to stylize the area. When playing Mario 3D World I took a good look at the over world map and decided that I wanted to partially go that way but a little more realistic and more serious too. I'll try to animate the tiles as in Bastion. Well, here's a first test render in progress. Still checking out the software.

Oh, I just like how I always find inspiration in videogames. The bottle animation ^^^ was influenced by the bottle-mix of different fruits in Pikmin3.

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Posted 20 December 2014 - 07:10 PM

I love the new art style, looks really cool.


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Posted 21 December 2014 - 06:43 AM

Thanks. Will add more object, life and color in the next stage

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