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#1 Elric

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Posted 13 May 2011 - 08:22 PM

(just a poem I made for fun. Intended for you to enjoy )


Why should I rhyme?
It's just a waste of time
I hate when people make it their prime
and act like not rhyming is a crime

I really hate when people rhyme stupid stuff
Like cheese puffs 
Sometimes I just have to say,
that's enough!

They do it in such a rush
It all seems like a pile of mush
When they try to give their poem
a big push

They always try to write better more
But always turns out really poor
Although it comes from the core

Why should I rhyme?
I say it's a crime
And I don't have the time

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#2 Waller

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 12:00 AM

Haha, i love it. :P

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#3 AMAC

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 04:18 AM

Nice poem superdarkyoshi. It reminds me of English lessons in primary school, where my teacher made my class rhyme our poems. I always spent ages thinking of words that rhymed and made sense.

#4 Ruthie

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 06:09 AM

I really hate when people rhyme stupid stuff
Like cheese puffs


LOL :D

Nice poem :P

Edited by Feld0, 14 June 2011 - 08:14 PM.

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#5 Camcam281

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Posted 14 June 2011 - 01:59 PM

Awesome poem yet again! Keep up the awesome work, and can't wait to read more!
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