To:
Sega
STOP Exclusive Partnership with Nintendo
Sonic fans who are not interested in have WiiU will miss at least 3 games!.
We respect your decision but we want you to please give us in the future Sonic Games for all plataforms!
Sincerely,
[Your name]
Are you serious? Do you expect a company to take you seriously when you make such obvious grammar mistakes? I don't usually get on to people for this stuff since most stuff on the internet is just regular conversation, but if you're sending a proposal to a business you have to fix your crap. "Sonic fans who are not interested in 'have' Wii U?" A period after an exclamation point? Really? Really? You couldn't have done better? This e-mail is 3 sentences long and every one is messed up.
The grammar isn't even the only problem. What's up with saying "We respect your decision?" If you respect their decision you have to give them reasons that their decision is logical and come up with reasons you disagree otherwise you're just blatantly adding useless words to sound friendly. If you want people to listen to your ideas you at least have to make it sound smart.
I don't even know anything about business but 3 sentences? Really? Do you expect 3 sentences to convince people that have been sitting in multiple meetings discussing this? People that have probably already signed some legal agreement? Really? Also do they even have a goal? Did they plan exactly how many signatures they thought they'd need in order to make a difference? Do they have a plan to get that many signatures? Here's one of the reasons these petitions don't work. People have no idea what they're doing.
These petitions are useless most of the time, they won't listen no matter how many people sign it.
Bull crap. They'd listen if they got enough signatures people just don't understand what a lot of signatures are. 100,000 is not a lot. 1,000,000 is a lot. Now these guys? They're getting like 2 signatures an hour. That's not exactly a large movement.
Edited by Symbol, 17 May 2013 - 07:15 PM.
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