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[Hinkik]

Hi I'm kinda of a newbie in the 3D world and I would like to share some of my renderings to see how you like them

The earth


This was made in Cinema 4D. There is some problems in this rendering, stuff like the sun is a bit miss placed.

The classic teapot from 3DS max


This was made in 3DS max and rendered in Vray.

One of my logos


This is from a tutorial I found on youtube but I changed it a bit and came up with this. I used Cinema 4D


Feel free to post your own and criticize my renderings.

[GeneralCraezy]

They suck. Consider yourself criticized.
loljk What do you mean 3D? Whats a rendering? XD

[Elric]

I love the bubble looking one.

Good job.

[Hinkik]

They suck. Consider yourself criticized.
loljk What do you mean 3D? Whats a rendering? XD

It's when you create a scene in a 3D program and render it. That is how the trex was made in jurassic park for instance.

[GeneralCraezy]

It's when you create a scene in a 3D program and render it. That is how the trex was made in jurassic park for instance.

Ohhh... I knew that...

I like the bubble one aswell

[StreetPassWanter]

I'm not much into 3D renderings, so I'm going to suck a criticizing. So I'm just going to say these are WONDERFUL! Now, I'm going to list the negatives:

1. The sun looks like it was taken with a bad camera
2. The top part of the cup is a bit blurry
3. THESE ARE TOO GOD DAMN GOOOOOD!!!!! So good, I want you to do #4:
4. Can you make one for me? Make the text green and do whatever you want from there. Just make it cool.

Edited by StreetPassWanter, 29 December 2011 - 11:16 AM.

[Hinkik]

I'm not much into 3D renderings, so I'm going to suck a criticizing. So I'm just going to say these are WONDERFUL! Now, I'm going to list the negatives:

1. The sun looks like it was taken with a bad camera
2. The top part of the cup is a bit blurry
3. THESE ARE TOO GOD DAMN GOOOOOD!!!!! So good, I want you to do #4:
4. Can you make one for me? Make the text green and do whatever you want from there. Just make it cool.

Thanks!

I made one for you quick just some hours.

Edited by Hinkik, 29 December 2011 - 02:08 PM.

[StreetPassWanter]

Thanks!

I made one for you quick just some hours.

Oops. I didn't know I'd be changing to Green Link, and I wanted StreetPassWanter. So can you make one? Sorry.

[Hinkik]

Oops. I didn't know I'd be changing to Green Link, and I wanted StreetPassWanter. So can you make one? Sorry.

Ok, sorry for my misunderstanding. So you want the same but with streetpasswanter instead?

[StreetPassWanter]

Ok, sorry for my misunderstanding. So you want the same but with streetpasswanter instead?

Yes, pretty much. Again, sorry if it took a long time.

[Hinkik]

There you go then.

[StreetPassWanter]

There you go then.

Thanks!

[Waller]

I'm not much into 3D renderings, so I'm going to suck a criticizing. So I'm just going to say these are WONDERFUL! Now, I'm going to list the negatives:

1. The sun looks like it was taken with a bad camera
2. The top part of the cup is a bit blurry
3. THESE ARE TOO GOD DAMN GOOOOOD!!!!! So good, I want you to do #4:
4. Can you make one for me? Make the text green and do whatever you want from there. Just make it cool.

Taken with a bad camera? Could you elaborate in what you're referring to?
Cup looks fine, IMO and it wouldn't really be Hinkik's fault.

The sun seems small.
Earth could use a slight bump-mapping.

I quite like the cup
Same for your logo.

Yeah, couldn't find much problems here, and I have no tips since we're using different software.

[Hinkik]

Taken with a bad camera? Could you elaborate in what you're referring to?
Cup looks fine, IMO and it wouldn't really be Hinkik's fault.

The sun seems small.
Earth could use a slight bump-mapping.

I quite like the cup
Same for your logo.

Yeah, couldn't find much problems here, and I have no tips since we're using different software.

Thanks.
I actually used bump mapping on the earth at 80% strength. I have no idea why it looks like there is no bump mapping... Maybe the res of the image is too low or is the AA too strong maybe. I don't know

[aaron]

These are really good. You could have a thread for signatures if you created them small enough.

[Hinkik]

These are really good. You could have a thread for signatures if you created them small enough.

Thanks
but creating just one signature takes a lot of time sometimes a day. Modelling, getting the light right and a lot of time while rendering.

[aaron]

That would be annoying.

[Bartman2]

Wait, are you taking requests?
I saw SPW's ones up there, and I just thought, you know, that's pretty cool...Bartman2...mebbe?

[Joshua]

Those look great man. Keep up the great work!

[Gruff]

These look awesome. I wish I could do this. I might learn someday...