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#1 Oath2Dario

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Posted 12 February 2012 - 09:19 PM

Here's just a little video/commercial of Kid Icarus: Uprising I put together earlier today. I think I did alright with it. I just wish I had more footage of the game to play around with.



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#2 Auzzie Wingman

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Posted 12 February 2012 - 11:02 PM

Oh cool, you still live! :D

Firstly, overused epic music is epic, but is also overused. Can't think of anything that's not lyrical at the moment, but needs something that sounds like some orchestrated Kirby stuff. (But obviously doesn't click "Kirby" in one's mind)

Second, I noticed there was in one part of the footage "Use Parental Guidance Lock Feature something something something" at the bottom. You could probably run that through the whole trailer. Just looks neater and more tied in that way.

Third, no atmosphere buildup at the beginning. Possibly start with a black canvas, and then slowly glint in some images, before going full throttle with Dark Pit landing in.

Don't know why I said Kirby.

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#3 Robotic Sunshine Commander

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Posted 13 February 2012 - 12:53 PM

i love this fan commercial you made its really good quality

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Posted 14 February 2012 - 04:26 PM

You went to the action too fast. You need to start it with chatty scenes for several seconds. Then the music starts then it has more action then it is finished.

#5 Brian6330

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Posted 14 February 2012 - 04:53 PM

Was a little bit too short and I would have prefer this theme with the trailer:







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