Comments & suggestions? Just trying to get feedback so that I can improve on my tshirt designs.
Edited by scribbleworx, 16 September 2013 - 01:45 PM.
Posted 16 September 2013 - 01:24 PM
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Comments & suggestions? Just trying to get feedback so that I can improve on my tshirt designs.
Edited by scribbleworx, 16 September 2013 - 01:45 PM.
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Posted 16 September 2013 - 02:02 PM
The shading and the ear look weird.
Also the lines aren't very smooth. Otherwise it's fine.
Edited by Big Boss, 16 September 2013 - 02:02 PM.
Posted 16 September 2013 - 02:21 PM
I like it. Maybe a little more detail.?
Posted 16 September 2013 - 02:33 PM
Thanks. I think I'll start using the pen tool instead of free-handing the lines.
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Posted 16 September 2013 - 04:01 PM
The shading and the ear look weird.
Also the lines aren't very smooth. Otherwise it's fine.
This.
Also, Ash's hand is wrong. He has five fingers and no thumb.
Edited by Mocha Bear, 16 September 2013 - 04:01 PM.
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Posted 16 September 2013 - 04:17 PM
Ash having been shaded in kinda clashes with the pokemon, but if that's intended then okay.
Posted 16 September 2013 - 04:26 PM
The thumb is that tiny fifth one in the middle.
Alright then, let me rephrase. I think he should close the gap between the 2nd finger from the right and the glove, it just looks awkward to me and gives me the impression the thumb is a finger. (But that's just me I guess )
Edited by Mocha Bear, 16 September 2013 - 04:29 PM.
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Posted 20 September 2013 - 05:36 PM
The general design is good, and the colours. I really like it
Posted 23 September 2013 - 07:30 AM
If this were a T-shirt I could buy, I'd probably wear it.
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Posted 25 September 2013 - 09:50 AM
In term of the hand, I'd get rid of the thumb altogether (it would be behind the index and middle) and the close the gap between pinky and ring, like mocha said.
Also, I'd extend and define the jaw a little.
Still a great design do
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